Wednesday, 30 October 2013
Farming
There were two brothers that were farming together. Luke and Beau.
Luke and Beau were farming for their village. For example hay from the fields, wool from the sheep, milk from the cows, eggs from the chickens, bread from wheat and seeds that turn into rice. Beau is the main farmer. Beau’s wife plants the seeds which turns into rice.
Luke asked Beau if they should “give the cows more grass for more milk.” Luke asked “we should give the chickens more hay then we will get more eggs.” Beau asked “yes we can get more food for the villages then they can stop asking for more food.” said Luke excitedly. “We can also kill some animals for some more meat.” whispered Beau.
Luke went up to the sheep and cows and they slit the sheep head. But before Luke slit the sheep head he shaved the sheep. “i’ve got one I just need the ugly brown cow now. “A sheep and a cow can feed the whole village.” said Beau. “Yahh! were gonna be rich if sell some of our wool, meat, eggs, wheat and rice.” said Luke.“we're gonna be rich!” Shouted out Beau. The village won’t be a so hungry and asking for more wool. Then the whole village were celebrating all because of Beau and Luke.
Tuesday, 29 October 2013
Roller Coaster
The sun was setting and a small little tree on a hill was blocking the view. My family came late at night to the Theme Park. My family came here because it was the holidays in Australia. In Melbourn, Glen Gray. There are millions of people who live here. So we decided to go on the less ridden rides. After that we got bored of these rides. The Theme Park closes down at 11pm and it was already 9pm so we have 2 hours left. We thought about going on the other rides but Daniel was too afraid of riding on them.
When we arrived at the place he was so scared. “stop being such a baby you're 22 years old.” Said Luke. “yeah” said Jai and Beau. “ok ill try but if I get scared I can get off right” Daniel said to the Janoskians. “We can probs tell the man to stop the ride.” “1 2 3.” said the Janoskians. “Daniel said I want to get off right now ahh!” The passengers said “no don’t stop the ride it’s fun.” The ride stopped “ohh! why Daniel why you’re such a little girl.” said Beau. “yes you are right I am a little girl acting like that lets do it.” Daniel said
Daniel was afraid that he would fall out of the roller coaster. “1 2 3” Daniel was finally a man now. He was so scared so he decided to hold on to something and he couldn't do that when he was a little girl. When he jumped off he felt brave. He finally conquered his scariest fare. “yay! I did it.” said Daniel. They went to another ride and he cried while he was on it. “not again.” “little girl.” said this random little girl. “it’s 11pm lets go.” said Jai. After that they went home while Daniel was having nightmares all about him falling off the roller coaster again and again.
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Thursday, 24 October 2013
Wednesday, 23 October 2013
Narrative Writing Practice
There were two brothers that were farming together. Luke and Beau.
Luke and Beau were farming for their village. For example hay from the fields, wool from the sheep, milk from the cows, eggs from the chickens, bread from wheat and seeds that turn into rice. Beau is the main farmer. Beau’s wife plants the seeds which turns into rice.
Luke asked Beau if they should “give the cows more grass for more milk.” Luke asked “we should give the chickens more hay then we will get more eggs.” Beau asked “yes we can get more food for the villages then they can stop asking for more food.” said Luke excitedly. “We can also kill some animals for some more meat.” whispered Beau.
Luke went up to the sheep and cows and they slit the sheep head. But before Luke slit the sheep head he shaved the sheep. “i’ve got one I just need the ugly brown cow now. “A sheep and a cow can feed the whole village.” said Beau. “Yahh! were gonna be rich if sell some of our wool, meat, eggs, wheat and rice.” said Luke.“we're gonna be rich!” Shouted out Beau. The village won’t be a so hungry and asking for more wool. Then the whole village were celebrating all because of Beau and Luke.
Monday, 21 October 2013
My Fun Holidays
Our whole school got together in the hall to have a meeting with our Principal Mr Burt. Mr burt was finally finished talking about keeping safe in the holidays. All of Pt England School yelled out. “HAPPY HOLIDAYS!” Then we all said our goodbyes to people.
The next day I went to Hoyts with my cousin Shaunie. We were watching the movie DESPICABLE ME 2. But first we brought some yummy treats from Hoyts. Shaunie only had 23$ dollars left so she brought some popcorn a soft drink and some chocolate. I only had 29$ dollars left I thought I would get some ice cream and popcorn.
When we arrived at our seats we had a perfect spot. We could hear people from the bottom and they said “Shut up you stupid now watch the movie.” Said Anonymous person. “SHH!.” Said people. When Despicable Me 2 started it was FUNNY :D. Everyone was laughing in the cinema. Gru’s Minions were fighting and fighting it was hilarious. It was up to the part when it got a little boring so Shaunie went for a little nap. It’s over :’(
Then my Aunt Tanya came on the 6th of October. Now the reason she came is so she can hang out with my brother and sister. When she came we went to Sylvia Park to ANZ. Then my Aunt took us to Reduce To Clear and I snuck a drink into the trolley -_-.
My Aunt got from Sub Ways seafood and it was yummy for her. My brother got chicken teriyaki and I did also. My sister got meatballs. After that we went to the why not shop. And we got lots of lollies and chocolates. “is’nt that just yum. Then we went back home then.............
She ask us if we wanted to go to the night markets in Glenfield. We grabbed lots of food it was yum. Then we pasted the Vector Arena where Rihanna she is a famous person. Then on the way home we went to Kiwi Ow it’s nice it’s yogurt. Then went home :P and i also i watched the cabin in the woods.
The End Bye
Friday, 18 October 2013
Matching Pictures
My group taramus were matching up farming photo’s. We were matching up some wine with some grapes. Then we were nearly finished our 2nd matches. Our 3rd one was difficult. When we were matching up our photo’s it was hard because we were all getting mixed up. We were so confused.
Now the reason why we are doing this is because we are learning about farming only the year 5’s and 6’s. We just figured out what sharing is and so we matched it up with the shaved sheep.
Now the reason why we are doing this is because we are learning about farming only the year 5’s and 6’s. We just figured out what sharing is and so we matched it up with the shaved sheep.
Wednesday, 16 October 2013
Docking Day
Aunt Mollie pulled the covers off Mikey and me. Aunt Mollie said “hurry up or else you will be here and the van won’t.” The kids were getting dressed, had some toast and bring their sack with them. When they went into the car it was too small all because of the basket and the aunt. The aunt was the fastest and she made the kids into ants.
The only reason why they chop the tails off of the animals. Is because to keep it clean and to stop the flies from laying eggs. Only the grown ups can do the docking but the kids will do a little. But most of the time they would roll down hills and chase the rabbits. They would think of mad games to play.
Aunt Mollie baked some biscuits, bread, Pies and Cakes yesterday. When they were finished working they could have a big feed. When they arrived the van was going all bumpy and they parked at the end of the farm near the sea. Uncle Tama parked under a tree.
The dogs started to do their work. All the way down the other side. All the sheep went down the hill like magots. The sheep were getting louder and louder. The mother sheep were getting worried about where their babies were. It was like a big dot. A chocolate delivery van stopped. The man from the van came out and took pictures of the sheep.
The noise was so loud they couldn't hear each other. So they screamed and yelled like seagulls. “chase them into the yard said Uncle Tama.” “hurry said Tama. Uncle Tama closed the gate. Mikey step back and watched the mother sheep find her baby sheep. I was nearly quiet.
Then something you would dream about. A noise came up of the hill. A heavy thud it sounds like metal wire snapping. We looked up into the sun. The man from the van wasn't taking any more photos. He waved his arm and jumped up and down. The chocolate van rolled over the hill and all of the chocolate fell out of the van. The van flattened the fence. Aunty Mollie was getting ready for our big feed. Aunt stood there and her wide mouth came out.
Tuesday, 15 October 2013
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